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Monday, June 24, 2019

Carrie holiday story

Plan - 
Explanation - Mac n Cheese.
Holiday food 29/4/19
Mac n Cheese
With Tuna salt and pepper 
Where - at home Awanui.Kitchen table
When - School  Holidays
Who - Mum and my brother 
Why - Dinner
What - Tuna Mac  n Cheese 

Carries Holiday Story
One night over the holidays my Mum cooked my favourite dinner Mac n Cheese.

Mum murt  / made my mac n Cheese with paret / pasta with Cheese and theun / tuna.

My mum called me for dinner. when / When  mum put my dinner on a palntt / plate i / I pialrt / picked up my thraek / fork and soaer / started  to eat. Yum!  My mac and cheese was so delicious. We got to choose salt or pepper but I wanted both.
It tasted amazing I wanted more.
I love Mac n cheese.

I have been learning how to edit.
Explanation writing- Recount and explain a meal you enjoyed during the holidays.

One night over the holidays my Mum cooked my favourite dinner Mac n Cheese.
Mum made my mac n cheese with pasta with Cheese and then put in tuna.
My mum called me for dinner. When  mum put my dinner on a plate I picked up my fork and started  to eat. Yum!  
My mac and cheese was so delicious. We got to choose salt or pepper but I wanted both. It tasted so amazing I wanted more.
I love Mac n Cheese.

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